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I like the way you handled the internal tug-of-war over the gun—it’s one thing to have a voice in your head, but having a passenger take over your trigger finger is a whole different level. Also good was the power dynamic shift from Emma to Jessica. Nice! That Big Brother vs. Big Sister line was a nice touch of wit, too.

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