I like the way you handled the internal tug-of-war over the gun—it’s one thing to have a voice in your head, but having a passenger take over your trigger finger is a whole different level. Also good was the power dynamic shift from Emma to Jessica. Nice! That Big Brother vs. Big Sister line was a nice touch of wit, too.
I like the way you handled the internal tug-of-war over the gun—it’s one thing to have a voice in your head, but having a passenger take over your trigger finger is a whole different level. Also good was the power dynamic shift from Emma to Jessica. Nice! That Big Brother vs. Big Sister line was a nice touch of wit, too.
Thanks very much! It’s a bit of a meta flip on the trope of AI taking over our brains. We’ll see where the story will go…